Umpteenth edit–HONEST rating please?
As the froth of nectar
that waters the pond of dreams;
you sputter
In your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snow’s soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
Memories’ butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced lashes –
–written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in our long forgotten
secret scripts
And i wishfully think
Is the rhythm
in honey dew drips
upon window sill;
simply the tunes
of my love for you?
Categories: Script Writing Techniques Tags: Blossoms, Butterfly Kisses, Cheeks, Cloud Patterns, Dreams, Embrace, Froth, Honey Dew, Lashes, Lilly, Love Letters, Memories, Nectar, Rhythm, Secret Scripts, Soft Flakes, Tunes, Window Sill
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As the froth of nectar
that waters the pond of dreams;
you sputter.
In your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snow’s soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
Memories’ butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced eyelashes
–written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in long forgotten
secret scripts–
And my wishful musings go
Is the rhythm I hear
in honey dew drips
upon my window sill;
the tunes of my love for you?
No its not about sex..i dont have a clear idea about what it is about though
Categories: Script Writing Techniques Tags: Blossoms, Butterfly Kisses, Cheeks, Cloud Patterns, Dreams, Embrace, Eyelashes, Froth, Honey Dew, Lilly, Love Letters, Memories, Musings, Nectar, Rhythm, Secret Scripts, Soft Flakes, Tunes, Window Sill
POEM! really NEED feedbacks?
As the froth of nectar
that waters the pond of dreams;
you sputter
In your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snow’s soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
Memories’ butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced eyelashes –
–written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in our long forgotten
secret scripts
And I wishfully think
Is the rhythm in honey dew drips
upon window sill;
the tunes of my love for you?
Categories: Script Writing Techniques Tags: Blossoms, Butterfly Kisses, Cheeks, Cloud Patterns, Dreams, Embrace, Eyelashes, Froth, Honey Dew, Lilly, Love Letters, Memories, Nectar, Poem, Rhythm, Secret Scripts, Soft Flakes, Tunes, Window Sill
How do you decide how to start your story?
Like, how do you decide where you want your story to start? Because of course there was things going on before in your characters lives, since most authors don’t begin their stories with the main characters birth, but the author usually just starts at one point, and then has the character have flashbacks or memories to what happened before the story started.
I’m not sure if everyone is going to understand what I’m trying to say, lol. And please don’t tell me to start writing, because I just want to know how YOU decide how to start your story. Thank you.
Categories: Story & Character Development Tags: Flashbacks, Lol, Memories
You may either fall in love with this or find it utterly rubbish.please comment?
Are you the sweet dew droplets
in the butterfly kisses
of my memories?
Are you the fantasy that seeps
down the pores of wet sand
into the valley of my dreams?
Are you the notes in
pitter patters
of honey dew drips
on my glassy window panes ?
Is that you who writes love letters
in secret scripts
of transitting cloud patterns?
Dont you melt as snowflakes,
down my cheeks
into autumn falls?
Is the starry trail of light i walk
simply the paths you take?
Categories: Script Writing Techniques Tags: Autumn, Butterfly Kisses, Cheeks, Cloud Patterns, Dew Droplets, Dreams, Fall In Love, Fantasy, Honey Dew, Love Letters, Memories, Pores, Rubbish, Secret Scripts, Seeps, Snowflakes, Wet Sand, Window Panes
What is the story about a man that literally gets hunted?
Recently, I’ve had memories of this story I read a long time ago. There was a man, and he showed up at some house or mansion or something, perhaps for a party? Or a game? Except the game was that HE was being hunted. Something off the wall like that, but very cool. Any suggestions would be helpful!
Categories: Story & Character Development Tags: Long Time, Memories, Party Game
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As the froth of nectar
that waters the pond of dreams
you sputter
and in your embrace
I bloom
as Lilly blossoms.
As snows soft flakes,
you melt on my petal cheeks
touching me
not quite.
At the golden break of day,
memories’ butterfly kisses
turn into love letters
before my interlaced lashes.–
–written amongst
changing cloud patterns
in long forgotten secret scripts
Categories: Script Writing Techniques Tags: Blossoms, Break Of Day, Butterfly Kisses, Cheeks, Cloud Patterns, Dreams, Embrace, Froth, Lashes, Lilly, Love Letters, Memories, Nectar, Secret Scripts, Soft Flakes






