I have written a tv script- any tips for looking over it and refining it?
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It’s 30 pages and needs a good looking over. Do you know if there’s a free site on the web that would do this? Especially if they are professionals.
It’s 30 pages and needs a good looking over. Do you know if there’s a free site on the web that would do this? Especially if they are professionals.

If they are professionals they won’t do it for free – if they are a professional proof reader then they make their money as a proof reader so you will have to pay them.
I would recommend getting a professional that you have to pay or some guy who will edit for free could steal the script
I would start with close friends and family. If there are gaps in the plot or something that doesn’t make sense they’ll tell you. Start with the ones who like me say things like ‘That doesn’t make sense Fred died in episode 3″ generally smart a**** who find the discrepancies. Then it might make sense to check in with the nearest university and get someone doing a degree in English or alternatively a tutor to check spelling, grammatical?
It might work but either way I admire you. Good Luck and if you want an opinion from me I’d be happy to look at it. Just email.